Writing with your ears. [ Part 2 ]




Writing with your ears [ Part 2 ]

Last night, in the pub, 
I sat opposite 
a very elderly couple.

The gentleman 

was recalling 
story after story 
to a rather 
mystified lady.

He told her 

about his father, 
and his attitude 
to work 
following WW1.

He was, 

I have to say, 
a very good 
storyteller.




heb deitl
steve coel


30 years ago 

in Brixton, London 
I had a conversation 
in a pub, 
with a lady 
who had been 
born in a brothel 
in France 
during WW1 
and was still wearing 
her mother's fur coat
that very evening.

40 years ago 

I had a drink, 
in a pub, 
with a father and son. 
The father 
had been a boy soldier 
in the Boer war 
in 1900.

As a writer 

of micro flash fiction 
I am sensing, 
ever so slightly, 
a shift 
in source material!

steve coel

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